Any technical writers out there tonight?

[FmGrowit]

I'm working on the wording for the blends and would like some input on my descriptions. I'll send you the descriptions, you'll proof them and hopefully embellish them a bit.

Let me know. I'd like to wrap this up tonight. Your assistance will be compensated.

 

[Boboro]

Ill see what I can do!

 

[Aaron]

I'd be happy to read over them. I'm certainly not a technical writer but I'm willing to try.

 

[FmGrowit]

Ill see what I can do!

What the hell...

I'll PM you the text.

 

[Boboro]

I was kiddin ya. I don't know what a tec. writer is.

 

[leverhead]

I can give it the Southern Yankee treatment.

 

[DonH]

I can take a look at it tonight but I probably won't get it done until tomorrow.

 

[FALaholic]

Ill see what I can do!

lol , Boboro, the Samuel Clemens of FTT

 

[leverhead]

lol , Boboro, the Samuel Clemens of FTT View attachment 8252

I'm kinda getting used to his unique writing style.

 

[Knucklehead]

I can play with it tonight if you're still up. My insomnia is kicking in.

 

[MarcL]

Can I see what you got Don? I'd like to give it a shot.

 

[FmGrowit]

Here's what I got so far. There's always room for improvement though. I'm actually pretty happy with the labels for each blend. Comments are welcome on those too.

http://wholeleaftobacco.com/Whole-Leaf-Cigarette-Blends_c17.htm

 

[MarcL]

I like it! I think I'd have to try them all. sounds nice ... the labeling feel seems to coincide with the descriptions.

 

[Knucklehead]

The labels are really nice. Congratulations on your new products.

 

[MarcL]

There's something unsettling about the "haphazardly thrown together" statement. where most likely true; I find it disrespectful.

 

[springheal]

There's something unsettling about the "haphazardly thrown together" statement. where most likely true; I find it disrespectful.

Maybe, but it gets the point across very well.

 

[MarcL]

Maybe, but it gets the point across very well.

In revisiting my initial analogy; and found it were most likely true, and honesty being the freshest thing to hear, and respect being earned, I withdraw. I like it. Thanks Phil.

 

[springheal]

Cheers

 

[deluxestogie]

I love the images that represent each blend. They seem to add a visual expansion to the written descriptions.

Although I was not rolling on the floor, the depiction of a battleship firing one of its big-gun, one ton rounds had me laughing for a while. I guess that Old-style Bold blend is...robust.

The Turkish Light image speaks of serenity. The others are equally suited to their respective blends.

Bob

 

[FmGrowit]

I love the images that represent each blend. They seem to add a visual expansion to the written descriptions.

Although I was not rolling on the floor, the depiction of a battleship firing one of its big-gun, one ton rounds had me laughing for a while. I guess that Old-style Bold blend is...robust.

The Turkish Light image speaks of serenity. The others are equally suited to their respective blends.

Bob

Yes, I agree, the battleship might be a little hyped up, but not too much...have you tried the American Old-Style yet?

I do some of my most creative work when I'm ready to pass-out from lack of sleep.